Carter Monroe

Sittin’ in With the Sun
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poetry by Carter Monroe
Copyright © 2001 by Carter
Monroe. All rights reserved. Printed in the
United States of America.
Certain selections in this
book have appeared in various forms in Poems
Niederngasse, Poethia,
Thunder Sandwich, Third Lung Review, and Lost
and Found Times.

Sittin’ in With the Sun
Visions of Inebrio 12
Bukowski Headed to Nashville 21
The New Lost Blues 22
Every Night in Tunesia 23
About the Author 24
There are two series of poems in this offering. The first, “Ra Postcards, “was
conceived from an idea proposed by poet Jeffrey Little who wished to do a
tribute to the late jazz giant Sun Ra. His project (which I hope to one day see
and possibly be a part of) was tentatively titled “Postcards from the Planet
Earth.” After discussing this cybernetically with Jeffrey, I wrote "Ra Postcards
#1 – 4. I had been away from serious composition for well over 20 years, and in
the lingo of the jazz musician, "was trying to get my chops back." I believe
this group of poems was the first step in the right direction.
The second series, “Visions of Inebrio,” gets its title from the journal I kept while
attending college in the early 70's. I recorded verses here and there in a manner
similar to Kerouac's "Blues" efforts. They served as a kind of poetic charting of
events. As a fiction writer, I've found that I have to set aside a regular period for
creative thought and planning. I view the actual writing of prose as a transcription
of sorts, the idea or the story having been conceived at some point in the past.
When I'm in between projects for whatever reason, my creative time comes in the
form of my afternoon ritual. This includes watching a soap opera, reading poetry,
listening to music, and drinking. Sometimes all four things may be taking place
at the same time. Virtually all of my fiction has been created during these sessions.
“Visions of Inebrio” is the first verse to present itself in this manner.
1
spouted riffs like leaking
jars in meandering mode planned but not
sky rocketed
sax/keyboard/rhythm section traveling in feigned dilemma
the sun, himself, thinking
of words philosophy negotiated through striking
black/white keys in sync
understood and garbled only in terms of the seemingly sane
where does it go, did it go,
is it going in time/place, distance/space, planet/race
and bird and diz, miles and
mingus, monk and trane watch from heaven's bandstand
squinting, off and on,
perusing, straight and stoned, peering perilously into saturn-ringed zone
waiting for a caustic moan
to acidify and define that which they can only hear
maybe ornette can help maybe
sid or mo or even jc maybe they can ask louis
if he ain't busy and if he
is who's left, fletcher don't wanna be bothered
2
the cards and money watch
the players cynically
through taint-plastered
regression
saint louie chicago 1949
transit shock
comes blaspheming in fire
balls of blue light
surrounding this gideon
ideal with a hellish glow . . .
sonny motions to the tenor
man who moves from the stand and nods
3
cracking crackling
periodontic sidewalk
college town 1955 coulda
been
the cars gave things away
48 yr old man, drunk
coulda been 1972 with a
different head
no beer no wine not even in
a bag
tattered golf shirt, tail
out
prominent bulge
egotistically protected
a sandwich shop-renaldo's
net
combat boots and bodies
laced with metal
designed arms, legs, and
faces
and places you can't see
"gimme a ham sandwich
and a budweiser"
they don't write it down or
hide their smirk
"you eat boring
food"
they snicker
he pushes the glass away
drinks from the can
a half gone before first
bite
non-music blaring buzzed-up
guitars
"you know who that
is"
they ask and grin
"i know it ain't the
sun, man
i know it ain't the
sun"
the drummer sets his sticks
aside, grabs his brushes and goes light
4
a dancer from across the
street calls herself tangerine
'62 more or less and she's
got more cat tracks than a white bird fan
they usta let'er in for
head, now it's for laughs
"nothin' but horns
tonight," she says for no reason then
"come on man, jesta
little touch, get me by this one time"
a suit tie fedora pulls
away-moves his hand/fingers across a thin mustache
"all i got's a
cigarette babe"
she looks at the sky,
righting herself against the back of a chair
"reefer, man . . .all
you got's reefer"
she scans the room, head
shaking voluntarily unlike her free hand
"tobacco . . . you know
like a chesterfield"
head falling as face finds a
smile
"i don't smoke that
shit . . . it'll killya"
the music stops, sonny
begins a yoga chant, the rhythm section answers, they dance
5
chops not great-not returned
old fashioned rehab pre
betty ford
they locked the door from
the outside
took turns standing guard
no food for the first three
days
the landlord complained
about the noise, the
screaming
he ate on the fourth, soup
and bread
kept it down on the fifth
philly joe had shown him
years back, had been his man
never played with more than
five
til rescued by the light
now methodical and precise
he tries to recover his soul
keeping time all the while
and remembering
sonny, standing, playing
with one hand, the stage lights reflect a purple aura
6
no trepidation in points to
be made
as standard work rock fair
increases visions
and it ain't gotta be night
his sky is prominent, stars
out always
the lectures from the heart
pontificating in scat laced
karma
the direction of saturn, the
birthplace
never in doubt, no hazed
confusion
this is where it's at, he
says
it's all for real and
there's this plan,
predestiny, and another
level
for once there is a soprano
sax, he solos briefly, the sun shines
7
word man now decked
out in opulent regalia
the mysticism reflects
the constellations/the
musics beam
as if alabama has become
some astral mirror
providing rebound for
the revelation
june turns a slight whirl as she approaches the mike the sun is elsewhere, frowning
8
crafted design of want
belies a thing
called judgment
the wafted craving
a signal of the need
creates its own pillage
from images of sate
inscriptions marked
as spots brown
emerge on the hand
face fingers touch
each other
in nervous contrast
ignorant
The bass player takes a
seat, wipes the sweat from his brow
9
it escapes
the sound
like a metaphorical
binge of sorts
searing its way
past blatant forms
of non-consciousness
the jackknife aspect
volutes itself
and regularly
a preface
barricades the light
in pompous revolution
hurdling a satellite
carousel into
a black hole
deep in the background, a
triangle is touched lightly. only the
sun hears.
10
recalcitrant precipice
exposed in secret
all the dogs
and other canines
roost in stagnant
metaphysical improbability
narcissus lies
to himself
to herself
the audience
defines itself
as falsely accurate
the percussion builds
to a crescendo
the sun takes a bow
11
Visions, I.
afternoon miraged escapist endeavors
miranda'd by fact
of sacrificed
dreams/potential now released in scandalized
malevolent anonymity-the
sounds of which differ with the
protrusion of the sun and
the intake of the stimulant
inebrio sits in buddha-like
silence for 11/12 hours each day
patience is his key - an
adult for periods then a pleading child
released w/out repercussions
or self-analyses from neowomb
and overhead blanketed
pillars reflective of tinctured prison
at first he begins to sing,
watching all the while an archetypal
blonde image showing through
screen of cabled electronics
the first tune is always a
subconscious billy-the-kid thing
from which he awakens and
reads back-and-forth poetry
12
Visions, II.
clocked revolution, an issue
only in terms of magnum p. i.
not much beyond to capture
that whirling interest possessed
and dylan sings, “sugar for
sugar and salt for salt, if you go
down . . .” jack’s letters, the second version, always
within
reach of wandering, nervous
hands and journey flattened
by remotes not in use, but
sometimes exchanged - the channels
commercials might force a
roam but who knows
after six this day the mute
calls, bellowing dogmatically
arrangements are made for
the melodies to take the lead
the augmentation begins to
come full circle w/three
things, now, being done at
once w/out lines or separation
he can’t hear that one, he
whispers, but loudly, it’s
not comfortable to remember
days of wine and flowers
dead, rotted, like so many
four-leaf clovers suppressed
and the words compose
themselves inside like a waitsian
rap discoursing among the
iconoclasts invisible in stereotype
of crumbling brick alleys,
burn barrels, broken glass, and
sterno carries it skyward
like the reminisce of hostages
and ghosts – flaking the
paint of preconception – ideals
are a thing from a
shattered, valvoline-slicked yesterday
where ruination was a
condition reserved for the wealthy
13
Visions, III.
forced exits to
veranda-placed ashtray, feet negotiating
steps toward earth, he has a
vigil, a policing, is the red
car home or the gray one,
are those lights connected to
a timer-dogs barking why and
why not – the baby’s on the way
how long can this peace last
– the speech left a half-hour ago
it’s only the sounds now, neil
young, trane, lyle lovett
their words and theirs alone
he thinks in appreciation
gratitude, as it were,
precedes wayfaring somnambulism
no need for alarm – clothes
shed – language brooding
the lifetime channel-female
biography hosted by subjective
link to lives impassive and
“in this business you have to . . .”
finally, the pillows placed
w/valentine candy nearby
14
Visions, IV.
there's a thinly veiled undercurrent
beyond which a reaming drum roll
sears as if rhythm is all inclusive
in terms of chafed benevolence
the monastery closes at eight
leaving the entrails tempted by
fantasies replete with jungian
subjective counterparts pulsing
and the walkers continue raising
their arms - an act of unknowing
defiance, but the best that they
can do, circumstances dictating
partial indemnity and a low budget
final resting place between a native
american burial ground and joe's
funeral home, 515 south grant st.
15
Visions, V.
in between piles and stacks
cd’s, jewel boxes, cassettes,
envelopes, unlabeled videos